Ogre Blocking Plus

My blocking plus pass is below. The curves are splined but I have not gone through all of them, one-by-one. Here is what I changed since last week:
-Turning head + jump out of way is one motion.
-Jump off of feet instead of moving an arm first; made that move faster
-Toned down acting beats/distinct moments, tried to make whole sequence flow
-Lots of hand/finger polish
-Added a slip-up to add texture to the movement - I'm not sure but I think it's reading as too slow and deliberate, too much of a 'moment', less accidental. In general I've been having some trouble getting moments like this into my work. I feel like a lot of my timing ends up very even and trying to break it up has been difficult for me.

Oops. So, I'm just seeing that we also needed to upload a sketchbook this week. I just assumed we had to work on our blocking+ so I haven't worked on it. Seems like an odd thing to slip in there after we haven't had to do sketches in weeks. Very sneaky. :] I will try and upload this tomorrow. Now it's time for sleep!